Love Poem: The Sun That Parts the Clouds
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Written by: Susan Ashley

The Sun That Parts the Clouds

Through frayed seams a rosy dream bleeds 
needled and re-stitched 
with threads of time and love and hope..

and still — a rosy dream bleeds 
the miscarriage of a promised rose garden 
leaving me bereft but for entwined bands of gold – 
contemplative thorns tempt my angst 
moony moody barbs bristle twigs of tenderness 

woe ‘tis not a laurel wreath worn atop my brow
as I sit alone with a squeamish friend 
my  blue-sky-to-storm-cloud  introspection.. 
as your distant eyes deserted mine long ago  

Winter's beast laid bare a cerebral graveyard — 
lost you wander amongst laid-to-rest neurons 
worn headstones of thoughts and laughter and memories..
you wonder why they hide  — why they died

the crackle of cognitive circuitry quiets 
branched-lightning fades from unwitting clouds.. 
and aged roots of reality perish 

our red rose finished..   fallen to pieces 
you-and-me-petals a messy heap like old potpourri – 
yet in the dark hush.. love’s scent lingers on our dream pillow 

O nostalgic sepals embrace me! 
my heart yearns to return to the bud  
the fullness of our June bloom — 

alas, I bury desires beneath life’s litterfall; 
pollenless stamens and leaves of one-sided reveries..
and cage my fear and despair behind purple thistle facing the light

as I free a smile for you, my love — 

you.. my sun that still parts the rain-bearing nimbus 


Susan Ashley
August 5, 2022


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