Love Poem: It Would Be So Great - the Monchielle

It Would Be So Great - the Monchielle

~It Would Be So Great~
(Monchielle)


It would be all so great
if people were more kind
and just show more kindness,
but world is so very blind
and there's sin and blindness

It would be all so great
if world just have more peace
was happy,never sad.
A place of so much joy
showing kid's faces more glad

It would be all so great
if people show more love,
where folks would get along
with no more greed, hatred,
where anyone would sing songs

It would be all so great
if there was no cancer
hunger,abuse,no more death,
where every man loves God
with their soul,heart and breath.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012


November.13.2015


~Authors Notes:

"The Monchielle" is a poetry style created by Jim T. Henriksen.