Love Poem: The Breaking Point
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Written by: Line Gauthier

The Breaking Point

i didn’t see it coming
for days walking in a daze
a fog that wasn’t lifting
obviously in shock
one foot in front of the other
on automatic pilot
not knowing what was next 
then it happened

his ashes were ready to be picked up

triggering a flood of tears
there was no turning back
no delusion of him just having stepped out
he was coming home in a box
he was coming home
home to stay



AP: 1st place 2022

Submitted on November 29, 2020 for contest UN-RHY-ME sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on November 25, 2020