Love Poem: Sublime
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Written by: David Scott

Sublime

When ever we're in the same room
                                         I always get a tingle down my spine
                                         It's like the smell of your perfume
                                         That always puts me on cloud nine
                                         
                                         You know like a flower you bloom
                                         And someone who really dose shine
                                         It's the way I feel when ever you loom
                                         I've never known anyone so sublime

                                         The way you make my heart go boom
                                         It's how you make me feel every time
                                         You have got me constantly immune
                                         I keep on wishing that you were mine

                                          When everythings doom and gloom
                                          You make everything seem just fine
                                           And you know your the one of whom
                                             I write these words so divine





                                       This is a follow up to one of a kind 1997
                            dedicated to the girl at mvc trying here I was to only use
                            two rhyming syllables this is what it felt like in her presence
                                                      And sublime she really was