Love Poem: My Sweet
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Written by: Lu Loo

My Sweet

Passionate memories crowd in my brain,
   a wished need so strong I just couldn’t resist-
     Our last sweet touch  l i n g e r s , it's still ingrained,
         for without you my sweet, I wouldn’t exist...
           Spending FOREVER with you I insist-
           My hands are warm from your tender embrace,
         your hands warm caressing my lovely face-
      My eyes wish to see nothing except you,
   for you move with such remarkable grace.
Our night of DESIRE is long overdue.

                     I cherish moments with  a d o r a t i o n,
                        remembering the good old days of youth-
                           Our love will pass on through generations
                              and our family tree will know the truth...
                                Throughout difficult troubles we sought ruth.
                                Beliefs that God had already designed
                            two longing SOULMATES forever entwined-
                         Stand still in my heart for eternity,
                     we are beauty and compassion combined-
                   We must ALWAYS find hope internally.




Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D
10 syllables per line

Date Written: August 26, 2016

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Date Finalized: August 31, 2016

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