Love Poem: Message In a Bottle
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Written by: Vijay Pandit

Message In a Bottle

Ordinary wasn't good enough for his love-filled notion So he bottled his message and floated it into deep ocean. Telling her he knew, red rose was her favorite flower Made of sweet memories and petals that never cower, Adorned with his sweet love of heart to heart appeal Destined for heavenly encounter by cupid's secret deal. In a faraway land a couple argued causing a breach When boyfriend split, leaving her alone on a beach. Disappointed she sought refuge from ocean breeze, As evening dimmed and anguish refused to ease. Twilight made a futile attempt to cheer her teary eyes When moon peeked with assurances in distant skies, Seeing the tides reaching their final leg on ocean Delivering the bottle swiftly with bouncing wavy motion. She opened the bottle curiously as angels watched merrily Hanging about to ensure she read every word carefully. Reading cherubic verses, enamored by his sincere plea Embracing heightened elation, she set herself free. Smiling broadly she called him, amid visions of divine sign And he cheered mightily having found his sweet-valentine. January 30, 2018 Placed 2nd: Brian's Choice 7 Contest by Brian Strand Placed 3rd: Best rhyming 2018 contest by John Hamilton Placed 8th in premiere valentine contest by Nayda Ivette Negron