Longing For You
Longing For You
Longing for your sweet embrace
your love and beautiful grace
The touch of lips so divine
the thrill of you being mine
I touch all your sweet spots
your body gives me the hots
Tan softly wrapping sexy curves
when with you I am all nerves
Feel of your whispering vow
that you belong to me now
Your sexy body naked in bed
your not waiting to be wed
Your touch, while so divine
Simply Stops this heart of mine
I send you this loving letter
For worse, or even better
Within your kiss, my breath flees,
I fall upon, weakened knees
Your hand, gently stroking my hair
You freeze me upon a glare
May be wrong, but not tonight
Surely, God sees, love so right
You're not mine, but you are tonight
Make love with our hearts wrapped tight
A collaboration effort
Robert Lindley and Kathryn Ramirez
09-19-2014
Syllables Per Line: 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7 0 7 7 8 7
Total # Syllables: 174
Total # Lines: 30 (Including empty lines)
Total # Words: 140
Note-- This as is meets my new form without the ending couplet
due to the opening 12 lines being answered by Kathryn's 12 line reply.. Robert
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