Love Poem: Lasting Compliments
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Written by: Lu Loo

Lasting Compliments

The variety of the lasting compliments
    you wrote to me last night
        became my starving salvation 
            for a lover’s flame to ignite

There’s freedom inside our castle caves
with resources beyond all reasoning.
My darling Nicholas, you are my beloved attached
by tenderness. I relish in your excellence as
you fancy my romantic flare.
I believe in your devotion, you break my 
walls and consume me. Grab me and fly to our 
chateau found in the sky. For the sky is our masterpiece
our soul saving wonder.
Remind me of all the reasons you carried me to your fortress
and loved me just right, like we did last night.
Devour my sanity and enrich my mortality
and crave me inside your warmth and release my passion.
I cherish you, my sweet, like no one else.
I savor every minute with you, my sweet, like no one else.
You’re captivating ways has lifted all my days
and we are nothing without each other.

The variety of the lasting compliments
    have exceeded all my expectations
        from our first glance we shared
            started a marriage of dedication

                  Written By: Laura Loo
                       Date Written: April 5, 2016