Love Poem: I Had You
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Written by: Lu Loo

I Had You

"as the rain pitter patters down my sill, 
             I think of our August picnics along the shore-
the days when our nutrients were nourished, 
      and stardust fell upon our lips as we kissed. 
for there is no path to the exit sign when 
                                             you're in love-
no hunger that can't be satisfied;
I never knew how thirsty I was, 
                          until you quenched me..."   



Before gold had rainbows I had you, my sweet,
            a KIND man whose arms held me as strong as ore.
            The way you look at me when I close the door-
my big teddy bear sweeping me off my feet. 

    Like petals on a tulip, you  c o m p l e t e  me,
pull me closer so you can hear my heartbeat-
when life drowns you in fear and you feel defeat,
    remember our guarantee of loyalty. 

No longer am I alone or  f o r s a k e n,
            for you give sights I thought I’d never see.
            How compassionate can one man really be?
Yes, my BELOVED, my heart did awaken. 

    S a t i s f i e d  sighs of love; soft words unspoken,
simplistic dreams down a path never taken-
for our precious love shall never be shaken,
    crimson Autumn vows shall NEVER be broken.


11 syllables in each line
rhyme scheme: ABBA-CAAC-DCCD-EDDE


August 15, 2019
Writing Challenge 2, August 2019-  Enclosed Rhyme
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