Love Poem: Did I Do It Right?
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Written by: Matthew Brackley

Did I Do It Right?

I winged my way..... 
Through the night 
When you opened your heart.... 
Opening the vulnerable you.... 
Exposed too 
I saw nothing, but light 

The love opens too.... 
Did I do it right? 
Winging my way through the night 
When I offer all.... 
Will she take it all? 
Will I fall? 

This is how I feel 
The heart ,so full 
Full for you.... 
What can I do? 
but love you 

Did I do it right? 
I lie with you.... 
All through the night.... 
The love to spill, 
my heart, 
beginning to fill, 
fill with light 

To breathe you in.... 
The smell of your hair, 
takes me there 
How long is the night? 
How long can I stay? 
How long can I bear? 
I want you too.... 
Did I do it right?