Love Poem: Another Work Day
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Written by: Edward Wraith

Another Work Day

(This is something different. Playing around and having some creative fun. One word per line, three lines per stanza. What do you think? Tear it apart and share your thoughts, opinions and criticisms. Thanks)

Another
Work 
Day

Alarm
Shower
Coffee

Husband
Wife
Goodbye 

Driving
Car 
Work

Neighbor 
Wife
Bedroom

Coffee
Sex
Cigarettes

Forgetting 
Husband 
Laptop

Taking 
Off-ramp
Next

Crawling
Traffic
Congested 

Turning  
Car
Around

Driving
Home 
Again

Parking
Driveway
Home

Panicking 
Wife
Disbelief 

Hiding 
Neighbor 
Closet 

Approaching 
Husband
Door

Greets
Husband
Door

Kisses
Wife
Entry 

Smelling
Husband
Cigarettes 

Smoke
Wife 
Doesn’t 

Searching
Husband
Suspicious 

Increasing  
Husband 
Anger

Backyard
Cigarettes
Found

Questioning 
Husband
Livid

Denies 
Wife
Tears

Investigating 
House
Yelling

Following 
Wife
Pleading

Searching
Bedroom
Threatening

Approaching 
Husband
Closet

Intercepts 
Husband
Wife

Pushing 
Wife
Floor

Tearing
Wife
Hysterics

Opening
Husband
Closet

Standing
Neighbor
Closet

Pleading  
Wife
Tears

Holding
Husband’s 
Pistol

Trembling
Neighbor’s 
Hands

Infuriated 
Husband
Roars

BANG
BANG
BANG

Ringing
Ears
Smoke

Hysterical
Wife
Crying

Stumbling 
Husband
Floor

Closing 
Neighbor 
Husband

One
Head
Shot

Pooling 
Blood
Floor

Bleeding
Husband
Dead

Shot
Own
Gun

Sharing
Husband’s
Bed 

Adultery
Wife 
Whore

Coward
Neighbor
Murderer

Scarlet 
Wife 
Accessory

Awaits 
Prison
Both 

(Based on a true story. This happened a few blocks from my previous residence. I took some creative liberties with the story, names are fictional.)